Rhiannon Aylward
Media Studies
Double Page Spread First Draft & Feedback
This is my first draft of my double page spreads that I proposed to individuals of my target audience for feedback.
As the feedback said that the double page spread lacked musicality, I set out to think of a way that I could incorporate it into the spread. I then decided on making an album cover for the magazine. This was relatively easy to incorporate as I had already spoke about the new album in the magazine article so it would be easy to link to the image. Not only was it just a album cover but the model is also holding a microphone.
I have also extended some of the questions and replies aswell as adding in more questions and answers. This elongated the magazine article which then filled up the space that I had left for it.
I agree with this feedback as over the double page spread you can not tell that it is a music magazine.
This is a very obvious flaw that I needed to rectify as it looks unproffesional and unfinished with this lack of article.